Better than a movie. Its not a remake, reboot, sequel, or formula. A startup should be able to disrupt Hollywood. There are stories out there.

The author needs an editor, and an agent.

Yeah but in my version of the story Eris dies at the end.

Too predictable, too morality fable. Better off with the truth.

Nope, audiences expect a certain level of payoff and just when it seems like he's in the clear, like things have turned around and they can maybe sympathise with him, BAM.