I'm in the process of auditing new low-power Po* algos for a crypto system I'm researching. This paper needs a way better abstract. The math is incomprehensible without knowing what it's end goal is. The paper uses acronyms (ex "Good ID") before explaining what they are. Overall a poorly written paper. The work maybe revolutionary, but what good is that if it's so difficult to understand. People forget that the purpose of a paper is to communicate your idea to other people. If it doesn't do that effectively then no matter how awesome the work is, you've failed.